Which of these comments about a team member's report draft is the least diplomatic?
A) I like the statistics that you provide in the introduction. I wonder if the audience will recognize these sources you consulted.
B) This introduction shows a lot of hard work. Perhaps an additional example would make your point even stronger.
C) You did not write this introduction very well. You left out a lot of important background information.
D) I know the proposal reviewers have very high standards. I think we all will benefit from improving our proofreading skills.

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Comment C is critical and does not provide any constructive feedback or suggestions for improvement. It is likely to be interpreted as an attack on the team member's writing skills and can be demotivating. The other comments provide feedback while still being diplomatic and supportive.

Which of These Comments About a Team Member's Report Draft