The following sentences form a paragraph. Proofread them for inconsistent person and faulty parallelism. Identify the type of each error in each sentence, or select "correct" if the sentence is free of errors.
-The innkeeper, Ruth Wakefield, had served traditional desserts such as apple pie, Indian pudding, and there was pumpkin pie, too.
A) correct
B) inconsistent person
C) faulty parallelism

Question

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The sentence has faulty parallelism. The list of desserts should be parallel: "apple pie, Indian pudding, and pumpkin pie."

The Following Sentences Form a Paragraph