"It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company." Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
A)"It is the case that those who communicate well advance more quickly in the company."
B)"It is true that good communicators advance rapidly in the company."
C)"Evidence has shown that good communicators quickly advance in the company."
D)"Good communicators advance more quickly in the company."

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The original sentence is already clear and concise, so the best revision would be to simply remove the unnecessary words and phrases. Option D accomplishes this while also maintaining the original meaning. Option A adds an extra phrase and changes the sentence structure, while options B and C unnecessarily use synonyms and add new information.

"It Is the Case That Good Communicators Advance More Quickly