Dakota and his team are creating a proposal for their supervisor to recommend that the company's database be redesigned.
-Which of the following would be best for Dakota to include in his proposal?
A)After the database redesign is approved, the developer will be contacted.
B)The developer will be contacted after the database redesign is approved.
C)After you approve the database redesign, the developer will be contacted.
D)After you approve the database redesign, I will contact the developer.
E)I will contact the developer after the database redesign is approved.

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D) This is the only statement that uses active voice throughout. In a proposal, use active voice rather than passive voice to describe services you will provide and the activities that your audience must complete. Active voice is both stronger and clearer, and eliminates ambiguity about who must do what ("after you approve... I will contact").

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