"You made mistakes in these documents that you must correct by the end of day."
The statement above uses "you" in a negative way. Which of the following best revises this statement?
A)I'd appreciate it if you'd fix the mistakes that you made in these documents by the end of day.
B)Please correct the mistakes in these documents by the end of the day.
C)The mistakes in these documents, you must correct them by the end of day.
D)Revise these documents by the end of day, and please, no mistakes this time.
E)Please don't make any mistakes in the documents this time.

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B) The use of "you" in the given statement is accusatory and overly authoritative. This choice is the best revision as it uses impersonal expressions.

"You Made Mistakes in These Documents That You Must Correct