"After your arrival at the airport, transportation to our office will be provided." Which of the following revisions best improves the sentence above?
A) replacing "arrival" with "descent to the runway"
B) replacing "transportation" with "car service"
C) replacing "to our office" with "to the location at which we do business"
D) replacing "at the airport" with "in the city that spawned our thriving business"
E) replacing "will be provided" with "will be graciously and warmly offered to your good self"

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B) This revision improves the clarity of the sentence. Transportation is vague, and the reader would be unsure as to whether a yellow taxi, a shuttle bus, car service, or other type of vehicle would be sent. The other changes actually make the sentence wordier and less clear.

"After Your Arrival at the Airport, Transportation to Our Office