Breaking up long sentences is an example of what type of proofreading?
A)Revising for clarity
B)Revising for conciseness
C)Revising for tone
D)Revising for organization
E)Revising for readability

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B)When revising for conciseness, make sure every sentence conveys the meaning you intend and that readers can extract your intended meaning without needing to read the sentence more than once. If you find yourself stuck in a long sentence, you're probably trying to make the sentence do more than it can reasonably do, such as expressing two dissimilar thoughts or peppering the reader with too many pieces of supporting evidence at once.

Breaking Up Long Sentences Is an Example of What Type