In a follow up report,Samuel wrote,"The proposal was unbelievably excellent and immensely entertaining.His amazing talents are a perfect asset to our already extremely talented team." Which suggestion for writing in a concise manner did Samuel violate?
A)Avoid redundancy
B)Do not overuse intensifiers
C)Avoid telegraphic style
D)Use subordination

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Samuel overused intensifiers ("unbelievably" and "immensely") which could have been expressed more efficiently.

In a Follow Up Report,Samuel Wrote,"The Proposal Was Unbelievably Excellent