Which course of action most improves the following sentence?
"The rule of law, a middle class that is growing and fair elections are all vital to a healthy, functional democracy."
A)Hyphenate middle class.
B)Remove the word all.
C)Change are to is.
D)Fix the parallel structure.

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The sentence is most improved by fixing the parallel structure. "The rule of law, a growing middle class and fair elections" has better structure.

Which Course of Action Most Improves the Following Sentence