Which section of the following passage needs to be edited for incorrect spelling, incorrect grammar, inappropriate word choice or wordiness?
A)In view of the fact that his
B)face was clearly visible on
C)the security cameras, everyone
D)assumed he would be found guilty.

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Corrected version: Since his
Instead of "in view of the fact that," you could write either "since" or "because" or "as." This phrase is filler and can be replaced with a single word.

Which Section of the Following Passage Needs to Be Edited