Identify which revision of the following example is correct: The helicopter sweeping down over the herd of beasts. The ranger leaned out, aimed his rifle, and shot the tranquilizer dart into one of the animals.
A) As the helicopter swept down over the herd of beasts, the ranger leaned out, aimed his rifle, and shot the tranquilizer dart into one of the animals.
B) As the helicopter swept down over the herd of beasts. The ranger leaned out, aimed his rifle, and . shot the tranquilizer dart into one of the animals.
C) The helicopter sweeping down over the herd of beasts; the ranger leaned out and aimed his rifle. And shot the tranquilizer dart into one of the animals.
D) There are no errors.

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Option A correctly uses a complex sentence to describe the simultaneous action of the helicopter descending and the ranger shooting, improving the flow and coherence of the original sentence.

Identify Which Revision of the Following Example Is Correct: the Helicopter