Read the following draft paragraph, and then select the letter of the sentence in each set below that is the best revision.
My niece is a ballet dancer. She has been accepted to the Dance Theater of Harlem. She will probably be a member of a professional dance company sometime in the future. She loves to dance. She has been dancing since she was five years old. She dances solo and also as a member of the ballet corps. I always enjoy attending her performances.
Which sentence is the best revision?
A) My niece is a ballet dancer.
B) My niece is a ballet dancer who performs both solo ballets and as a member of the ballet corps.
C) My niece is a ballet dancer and I always enjoy attending her performances.

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Sentence B adds more specific information about the niece's capabilities as a ballet dancer, making the paragraph more descriptive and interesting to read.

Read the Following Draft Paragraph, and Then Select the Letter