Proofread the following sentence(s) for inconsistent tense and person. In addition, check for faulty parallelism. Select the type of error each sentence contains. Claude occasionally drops by my dorm room for a visit, but you don't expect him to visit every time he's in my neighborhood.
A) inconsistent tense
B) inconsistent person
C) faulty parallelism

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The sentence shifts from first person ("my dorm room") to second person ("you don't expect him"), which is an example of inconsistent person.

Proofread the Following Sentence(s) for Inconsistent Tense and Person