English Skills with Readings 9th Edition by John Langan, Zoe Albright

Exercise 11

The author of "Dangerous Places" in Activity 16 made a number of editing changes between the second draft and the final draft. Compare the two drafts and, in the spaces provided below, identify five of the changes.

1. ____________________________________

2. ____________________________________

3. ____________________________________

4. ____________________________________

5. ____________________________________

Step 1 of 3

Note:?Each of the following changes in details could count as one of the five answers that students may provide.

?1.?A title (“Dangerous Places”) has been added.