Consider the following statement: "Employee managers can use our motivational tools to motivate their employees to increase productivity." The best way to make this statement concise is to
A) eliminate the passive voice.
B) remove empty phrases.
C) replace a prepositional phrase with a verb.
D) start with "It is" or "There are."
E) remove redundant words.

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Removing the redundant words from a message is a way of making a business message concise.The above statement can be rewritten,"Managers can use our tools to motivate their employees to increase productivity."

Consider the Following Statement: "Employee Managers Can Use Our Motivational