Choose the sentence below that includes specific verbs and modifiers that energize the writing.
A) After the baseball hit me, a lump began to form.
B) When the ball hit me, I could feel a big lump start to grow.
C) Seconds after the baseball cracked against my forehead, a throbbing red lump had begun to swell up.
D) Right after the ball struck me, a lump began to grow.

Question

Choose the sentence below that includes specific verbs and modifiers that energize the writing.
A) After the baseball hit me, a lump began to form.
B) When the ball hit me, I could feel a big lump start to grow.
C) Seconds after the baseball cracked against my forehead, a throbbing red lump had begun to swell up.
D) Right after the ball struck me, a lump began to grow.

Quizplus · Accepted Answer

This sentence includes specific verbs (cracked, had begun to swell) and modifiers (Seconds after, throbbing red) that add detail and description to the action taking place, making the sentence more engaging and energetic.

Choose the Sentence Below That Includes Specific Verbs and Modifiers