A sentence reads, "We must review the feedback that is enclosed within this email and act on the suggestions that the customer has offered us." Which of the following correctly rephrases this sentence to make it less wordy and to reduce the business jargon in contains?
A) We must review the feedback enclosed along with this email and then see whether we can act on the customer's suggestions.
B) We must review the enclosed feedback and act on the customer's suggestions.
C) We must review the feedback that is enclosed and then act on the suggestions offered by the customer.
D) We must review the feedback that has been enclosed and then act on the customer's suggestions.
E) As per the feedback enclosed herein, we must act on the customer's suggestions.

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Option B rephrases the original sentence in a less wordy manner and reduces business jargon by directly stating the need to review the enclosed feedback and act on the customer's suggestions without unnecessary phrases.

A Sentence Reads, "We Must Review the Feedback That Is